ok this isnt a manga YET but this is a start of one that i wrote. i would like to know what you think-ok?!?!?!?!?!?
The Day I Died
My name is amber and I hate my life. Here some info about my life or what I know about. i am a swimmer @ my high school. i love to talk to people. all my friends say i talk 2 much. i am very trust worthy (that is what my friends say and i agree).
I never really thought how people are, more of how they look. My parents (or so a though) were like everyone else. Had good jobs, make good money, but I never liked them at all. The day I went to Japan was the day I died, not really. (I don’t really die, just change)
It was a pretty good day, when my so called parent told me that they were going to sent me to Japan for a semester of school. – I thought cool Japan, I always wanted to go- But after a minute they told me I was adopted. – I was scared. I had been living with strangers all my life, then I remembered a time I lived with different people. It was a long time ago, I was about 3 or 4 years old the different people I had lived with had beat me and done horrible things to me.- they all so told that my best friend would be going with me, her name is Jesse.
I had started to pack, when I got a phone call.
“Hey it’s me (Jesse)”
“Sup” (me)
“What am I going to bring?”
“ ummmmmmmmmm first we need to buy a few uniforms for school, everyday clothes, bathroom stuff, school supplies (no blades like scissors) computer, some food, shoes, I think that’s it, we can buy anything else there. Do we have some place to live?”
”yup, our parents combine their money to get us an apartment near the school. I saw it online.”
“Ok”
“Honey u need to get off the phone” (mom)
“Ok. I gtg”
“Ok, bye” click
“Hon u will be leaving in two days”
“Ok”
The next day was my last day at school, had told all my friends and word had spread fast. People I didn’t know knew I was going to Japan. It was also the last day to tell Rick that I like him a lot.
“hey rick, umm r u bored?”
“Yea I have nothing to do right now excepted to go to class”
“oh, ummmmmmm I was wondering if I can talk to u after school?”
“ummm sure, but it has to be quick because I have track practice.”
“ok, can u meet me by door 5 at the top of the stairs?”
“sure, see u then.”
“ok”
when I had told him it was between 6th and 7th period in the halls. I was excited to tell him what I wanted to tell him for 2 months. But I was also scared of what he might think of me when I told him that I liked him. – does he have a gf? If he does then I won’t tell him that I like him, but that would make sense why I told him to meet me after school. What to do, what to do?-
end of school at door 5 at the top of the stairs. No one but us was there.
”hey, how r u?”
“ sup, good” “u?”
“good, so ummm do u have a girlfriend?”
“no why?”
“ok good, um for the past 2 most I have liked u a lot even though we don’t hang out at all or even barely talk to each, I was wondering if you wanted to go out with me?”
“ ummmmmm if we are going to go out, wait, when? Don’t u leave tomorrow?”
“No I leave the day after tomorrow. But if u don’t want to then u just have to say so, I mean its ok.”
I started to walk away and was about to cry
“U never let me finish. R u busy tonight and tomorrow? If ur up for it we can stay out all night and be together all day tomorrow.”
“But u have school”
“So”
“Ok ummmm where should we meet?”
“We can meet at my house; does u know where I live?”
“ ummmmmmm not really, I mean I know where u live but I don’t know what house.”
“2380 Hardwood Ct SW and meet me @ 6:50”
“ok, later”
after that I went home and called jesse
“this is mega important. I need away to stay out all night with out my parents knowing that I am with a guy they don’t know and who is my boyfriend”
"i understand...what do you want me to do...how can i help u?"
" ummmmmmm i will say that i am going to sleep over at ur house, when i am really at rick's house"
"all right...so i'll cover you!"
"and if they call ur house then say i am in the bathroom or something"
“ok”
“I have to go ok?”
“ok, bye.”
“later” click
-I didn’t know how I was going to get to Rick’s house, but I remember that I could drive. But the one thing wrong with my plan was that jesse lived close by and my-so-called parents could drive by the house and not see the car.- but I didn’t care if they caught me and not let me go to japan.
I went over to rick’s house, and I found out that he was ferkin rich. His house was huge; I had never seen such a big house in my life, except on TV. I went up to the door and rang the doorbell. After about two mins., I knock on the door.
